Your friend asked you to teach his son English. You need to borrow some English books from your teacher Write a letter to your teacher requesting these materials. In your letter you should share: - Details about the child. - What type of books you need. - When and where you are going to teach this child

Dear Mr.Smith, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to request your assistance in borrowing some

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books for a teaching endeavour I am undertaking. A close friend of mine has asked me to help his 10-year-old son, David, improve his

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skills. He has recently passed his fourth grade, and now he has some free time to sharpen his

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areas. He is good in some

basics

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vocabulary but struggles with

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reading comprehension and grammar. To improve his

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I would need a variety of materials. Could please lend me some grammar workbooks and storybooks suitable for his age?

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if you

could

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provide me with comprehension exercises for practicing at home

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I think these resources would greatly assist in structuring lessons for him and provide him with the

practise

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materials he needs. I plan to conduct these tutoring sessions twice a week, on Wednesday mornings and Saturday evenings, at my

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house, which is close to my school. I believe

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will provide David with

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environment and allow him

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consistent growth. Thank you so much for your kind support. Your help will be invaluable in helping David improve his

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skills Best Regards, Amanjot

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure every idea has clear links to help the reader follow your thoughts more easily.

coherence and cohesion

In each paragraph, focus on one idea, but make sure they connect well with each other.

task achievement

Check for minor grammar mistakes and improve sentence flow for better understanding.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has a clear greeting and a polite closing.

task achievement

You have addressed the specific needs of the child well.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

205 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

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learning style
grammar
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storybooks
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