The flow chart below shows an automatic photo booth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The flow chart below shows an automatic photo booth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The flow chart below shows an automatic photo booth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart represents the automatic photo booth and its components. It is clear from the chart that it has two screens, the first one is outside
while
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the other is inside the cabinet. In the outer part, people
chould
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could
chose
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choose
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between two different sizes either the large format photo or
passport sized
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pictures.
Moreover
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, there are two options regarding the colours of the pictures
weither
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whether
black and white or coloured ones,
as well as
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the payment
are
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done only by coins. For the inner part, there is a mirror to let the users check how they look before the picture is taken. Clients need to adjust the
hight
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height
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of the chair in order to match the same
eye level
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logo presented
in
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on
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the facing wall. Another point to consider, curtains must be closed
while
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taking photos.
Finally
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, individuals have to wait for
light
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a light
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signal
flash
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to flash
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after three seconds, and after
that
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that,
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the photos
is
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are
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printed after 60 seconds.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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