he diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas.

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key information about

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cycle in two

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forested and urban. The units are measured in steps.

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, it is clear from the graph that

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in the forested places.

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has reduced

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before the increased erosion. In terms of frosted places ,the difference we can see here is the water table is higher, and

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instead

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only

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Jun 11, 2025

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