You live in a house opposite a park. Every day a man brings large dogs to the park and lets them run free. Write a letter to your local council complaining about the danger. In your letter -say where the park is, -say how often this happens -give a description of the man and the dogs.

Dear Sir , I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to a serious threatening situation which will cause a detrimental impact .A man brings dogs to the park and

unleash

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unleashes

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them to run freely and

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would be a dangerous situation for the children . My name is Harvi and the address of the park is 44 Grills Park Cambridge, Ontario

and

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apply

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location

within

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walking distance from my accommodation.

Majority

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of the younger and naive children used to come to

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place with their parents to enjoy their leisure time

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, the parents preferred to keep them at their home in order to protect them . A person brings two black colour German Shepherd dogs with him for the stroll between 5pm to 7pm and he

let

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them free to run .He is a tall guy and has a fair complexion. He is 35 years old always wearing a black hat .I believe he is not a local resident because I have seen him

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parked his car and the license plate number is cdf545. I hope you will take strict

actions

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against him to avoid unwanted nuisance and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Anc

Kaurharvinder2984Wed Jun 11 2025

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Make sure to clearly state the problem at the start of the letter and how it affects the community.

coherence and cohesion

Use simple sentences to connect your ideas better. Each paragraph should have one clear idea.

coherence and cohesion

Add a more polite closing statement to show respect.

task achievement

You provided specific details about the park and the man with the dogs, which helps to make your complaint clear.

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Your letter is written in a formal tone which is appropriate for the local council.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

203 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

public safety
unleashed
danger to pedestrians
local regulations
particular concern
pose risk
hazard to children
aggressive behavior
council action
identifiable features

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