It's a very debatable issue around the world which
should be considered the correct
when a
is considered to start making
on his own. Generally seen, the
of 18 is widely
worldwide when an individual should be responsible for his own actions, whilst, in some countries, a higher
as 19, 20 or 21 is considered the accurate
.
. I believe 18 is the correct
when a
should be accountable for his actions or must be responsible for making
for his own life, towards his family and society. I will explain both sides
my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
In some countries, especially in Southeast Asia, decades ago, a common trend
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that at the
of 14-15, youth commenced to manage their family business or start earning by doing labour, or a job, and got married early too. They believed that after getting primary education, they are
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enough to think about their bad and good.
, societies
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that a
is capable enough to handle their work, once an individual
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to earn, he is eligible to make their own
in terms of job, marriage, driving, drinking, voting etcetera. Though
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the truth cannot be ignored that
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of them are able to perform their life duties successfully,
, governments made
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of 18 based on previous trends,
of setting high
limits.
On the other side, in some countries, people opine that up to 18, a
is still in the teenage period, not have enough wisdom to make important
in his life on his own. In
, teenage is considered
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the developing
, when a
's mental abilities are still
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considered after completing 19, when a
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into 20,
only he is capable of making
,
, some think that up to 21, they are in adulthood
, so they could perform wrong actions before 21,
, they should be allowed to take responsibilities after passing their adulthood time
21.
In conclusion, I would wrap up my essay with my opinion that we are now living in a globalised world, and all the people living in
world have the same capabilities,
, there must be a standard
to be considered
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adulthood
, and adult
, so that same
limits must be set in each country.