Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to offer time for local environmental initiatives in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter: Describe a local volunteer project that you are passionate about Explain what you would like to do to help Suggest how to gather more support for the cause

Dear Sir or Madam, I saw

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article in today’s newspaper ‘The Tribune’ regarding environmental support from

local

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the local

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community for

upcoming

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project ‘The Clean Locality’. I am very fond of nature, and I want to offer my help as a volunteer in

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initiative with growing trees and cleaning surroundings as a number of trees a cut down in

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last

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few years. I really want to bring my society together to clean local parks and to grow more trees. Helping a local community I can assist with buying

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apply

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small planters and seeds with

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collection from my pocket money and

donation

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donations

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from my building which helps

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project to grow. Even I can arrange some soil sampling from local farms. Gathering

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support from local people is easy to arrange as Environment Month is starting from coming Monday, I can help you arrange a motivational speaker who can guide people with his lecture. Thank you for your time,

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to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Shivani Shivani.

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to clearly separate each part of your letter in different paragraphs. This helps with clarity.

task achievement

Use a more formal tone in your closing and greeting.

task achievement

Try to be more specific about the local project you care about and how it helps the community.

task achievement

You have a good intention to help the environment and your community!

coherence and cohesion

Your enthusiasm for the project comes through in your writing.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

169 words

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