The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who are 5 portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who are 5 portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who are 5 portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
The bar chart illustrates data in the United Kingdom about many percentage of people who ate fruit and vegetables per day in 5 portions between 2001 and 2008. It is measured in 3 categories which are
men
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, women, and children.
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,
it is clear that
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in all periods, women were dominated,
although
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the difference between each sector fell in the
last
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2 years. Starting at exactly 20, women increased significantly until it reached its peak in 2006, where between 30 and 40 consumed 5 portions.
Then
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, it decreased moderately to below 30 in 2008. Children ate more than
men
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, with almost 20 in 2001. It remained stable until 2003 before increasing slightly to below 30 in 2006.
While
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in 2007 it was still the same as the year before, it happened a gradual drop in the final year.
Men
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were relatively stable. In 2001, 10 per cent of
men
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ate 5 portions of fruit and vegetables, and still the same until 2003. From
then
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on, it rose considerably to around 25 in 2007, almost the same as children before dropping a bit in 2008, below 25.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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