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Band 2.5

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps
illustrates
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illustrate
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 information about
southwest
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the southwest
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 airport at present and future development which will take after year. In general, w hat stands out from the figure is that the airport will face significant changes and
also
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 will
be opened
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open
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 new facilities
such
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 as ATM, sky train,
car
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and car
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 hire.
Firstly
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, in future, the number of
gates
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 will be extended, from 8 to 18.
Moreover
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, the location of
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gates
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the gates
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 will be in
Y-shape
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a Y-shape
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.
In addition
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,
for
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apply
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the passengers will be installed sky train in the middle of all
gates
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. Up the security and passport control will open shops for travellers. In the departure will be placed bag drop for
convenience
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the convenience
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 of people and
opposite
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the opposite
an opposite
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 side of the bag drop will
replaced
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replace
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check-in
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the check-in
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 desk. The cafe will
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be trasformed
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trasformed
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transformed
transform
 to near
ATM
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the ATM
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 and
car
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the car
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 hire will be in the corner of the right arrivals sector. In conclusion, the southwest
airwort
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airport
 will expand after
year
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the year
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, which will include more facilities for passengers
such
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 as 18
gates
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, car hire,
atm
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ATM
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, Sky train, etc.

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task achievement
Make sure to clearly describe all the main changes in the maps without missing any details. You should mention all new facilities and changes to the existing layout.
coherence and cohesion
Try to organize your ideas more clearly. Use paragraphs to separate different parts of your description and make it easier to follow.
coherence and cohesion
Use basic linking words like 'firstly', 'next', and 'finally' to connect your ideas smoothly. This will help your writing flow better.
task achievement
You have identified some key changes in the airport layout, such as the increase in gates and the introduction of new facilities.
task achievement
Your conclusion summarizes the main developments well, making a strong closing statement.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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