A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntaryl unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter• explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
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letter to express my interest in doing a part-time unpaid job as a museum educator
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Martyr Udaam Singh
museum
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Museum
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. I've completed a master's degree in history. I am working as a tutor at D. A. V. school, Brampton. I am looking for a part-time job as a volunteer that
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me to get experience in the field. I found that working in a museum is an ideal place to get in-depth knowledge about history. I have countless skills and qualities that include teamwork, patience, and communication skills. I
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hold a
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degree. I
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be available
from
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next month on
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from 2nd June. I would appreciate
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you give me the opportunity to work. I am looking forward
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you
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positive consideration. Yours faithfully, Rupinder Kaur.

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Task Response
Try to make the purpose of your letter clearer in the first paragraph.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use more connecting words to join your ideas together smoothly.
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Be careful with grammar; check your sentences for small mistakes.
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Your passion for history is clear and adds depth to your letter.
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You provided useful details about your skills and availability.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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