In some countries, most people prefer to rent their houses rather than buy their houses. What are the advantages of renting a home? Should governments subsidise house prices to first home buyers?

Many individuals in some nations prefer to rent

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instead

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of purchasing their own

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.

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is beneficial because tenants do not have to cover the costs of damages in

a rented apartments

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and it provides flexibility in moving

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. I believe governments should make the

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of

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more affordable to first-time buyers because it will encourage many middle and low-income earners to purchase their own

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without

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hesitation

. One of the main advantages of living in a rented

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is that the residents, especially those who earn low incomes, do not have to pay extra charges to fix broken or damaged facilities in the home. People who live in these types of

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, rely on the Landlord to cover expenses

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as plumbing works, faulty electrical connections, and broken cupboards and wardrobes

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, which is more beneficial to them because they do not end up spending money they did not budget to spend.

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, residing in a rented

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provides an individual and family

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opportunity to easily move

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compared to one's own home, whereby the logistics of moving

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are more difficult.

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, a family who moved

in to

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a rented

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,

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will find it much

convenient

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to relocate to another area, if they are unsatisfied with the one they reside in currently. Governments should subsidise

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prices

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to

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first-time buyers because

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will motivate a lot of people who earn low and

middle range

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incomes and

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students to buy their own

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without hesitation. Nowadays, many adolescents aspire to live in their own

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and making the

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of

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inexpensive will help them achieve

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dream.

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, the Government of the United Kingdom has subsidised

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prices

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for first-time purchasers and

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has motivated more youths to buy

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of their own. In conclusion, many people would rather rent

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instead

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of buying their own

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.

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is to their advantage because they spend less money on home expenses and provides flexibility in moving

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. It is essential that state authorities make the

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of

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cheaper for individuals buying them for the first time because it enables them, especially adolescents, to

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fulfil

their aspirations of living in their own

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.