The bar chart shows the data of five portions of fruit and vegetables eaten by children, males and females per day in the UK between 2001 and 2008.

The bar chart shows the data of five portions of fruit and vegetables eaten by children, males and females per day in the UK between 2001 and 2008.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart shows the data of five portions of fruit and vegetables eaten by children, males and females per day in the UK between 2001 and 2008.
The bar chart depicts the total
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of men, women and children who ate five portions of vegetables and fruits per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
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, in each
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, women ate the most
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children had the least, and the consumption by men was in the middle. From 2001 to 2006, women's nutritional intake was five times a day. It showed continuous growth. It rose from around 20% to more than 30%, and in the next 2 years, it decreased steadily near 29%.
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the male category dietary habits stayed the same, which was more than 15%, until 2003. After it shot dramatically by 27% till 2006, and there was a decline in 2006 by 1 or 2 percentage. Men and children showed the same pattern of growth
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but with different ratios. By the
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2003, the growth was stable at around 12%. Over the
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2006, it surged by more than 25%. And
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decreased by 25% in the
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2008.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumption trends
  • Demographics
  • Public health campaigns
  • Per capita
  • Consumption patterns
  • Nutritional intake
  • Statistical analysis
  • Dietary habits
  • Health recommendations
  • Daily servings
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