The maps illustrate changes in the layout of the city from 2000 until today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The maps illustrate changes in the layout of the city from 2000 until today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps illustrate changes in the layout of the city from 2000 until today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Both maps show
how
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what
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a
city
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named Nelson looked like in 200 and
how
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what
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it looks like currently. In the past, the area had much fewer buildings than now. Only the university remained
along with
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the
city
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centre
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,
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however
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however,
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the old market was replaced by the new shop. Today the town built a hall of residence, a new covered market, and
restaurant
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a restaurant
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with bars and clubs along the seashore. The trees were replaced by a new shopping
centre
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. Bike rental places appeared in the
city
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centre
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on the newer map. The car road was shut down, and now there is a lane, made only for pedestrians, where vehicles are not allowed. The newer version of Nelson implemented a tramline, which gives
a
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the
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possibility to travel from
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city
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the city
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centre
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to the direction of
university
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the university
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. The old train station was destroyed and erased from the 2000’s map,
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however
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however,
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a brand new train station appeared right by the
city
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centre
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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