The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

The illustration displays how bricks

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are

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produced to be used in the

counstruction

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construction

industry.

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, the process includes seven stages before the delivery of the final product. The main stages are collecting the raw materials and mixing

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them

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then

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shapping

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shaping

and heating the bricks before packaging

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them

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to be delivered. The first stage in

this

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process is digging the land to collect the clay

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then

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and then

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removing the metal from the clay. After that the water is added to the sand

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the mixture is shaped into

brickes

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bricks

eaither

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either

a wire

cutler

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cutter

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or a mould. The

seconed

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second

stage starts with moving the bricks into a drying oven for about one to two days. After it dries the

brickes

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bricks

are going

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through a moderate

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then

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a high heating process in the

kilin

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kiln

killing

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it is left to cool for two to three days

befroe

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before

packging

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packaging

then

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delivery.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

146 words

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Although more and more people get the news on social media, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?

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