The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of the frequency of eating junk
food
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at fast
food
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restaurants among individuals in the United States in different three years: 2003, 2006 and 2013.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that
people
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tend to eat fast
food
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frequently. The most were once a week and once or twice a month,
while
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the percentages of
people
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who ate every day or never were the lowest.
In addition
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, the trends show initial
grew
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but
eventually
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eventually,
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they dropped.
According to
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the data, the percentage of
people
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who never ate fast
food
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in all three years was less than 5%.
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those who consumed several times a week in 2003, 2006 and 2013 were nearly 17%, 20% and 16% respectively. Those who ate once or twice a week were just above 30% in 2003 and 2006,
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in 2013 they were almost 27%. In terms of once or twice a month, 30% was recorded in 2003, 25% in 2006 and approximately 33% in 2013. The proportion of consumers who ate a few times a year was nearly 13% and 15% in both 2006 and 2013.
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, in 2003 accounted
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% of
people
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who never visited fat restaurants, and just 5% and almost 4% in 2006 and 2013.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast food consumption
  • dining frequency
  • decade overview
  • trend analysis
  • to dine out
  • fluctuation
  • sharp increase
  • gradual decline
  • eating habits
  • statistical comparison
  • consuming pattern
  • noteworthy change
  • anomaly
  • periodic comparison
  • data interpretation
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