It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Nowadays, educating

children

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at an early age

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distinction

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between

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what is

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and wrong is a crucial part of their personal development. Some people opine that punishing

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is an effective way to teach them the

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behaviour

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and

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them what they should do. I partially agree with

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the fact that different types of

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exist and certain ones can cause detrimental consequences on

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’s mental health. On the one hand, raising

children

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requires a lot of patience and energy, because they are unaware of

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of their

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and usually tend to do both

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and wrong things. If

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do not know the difference between bad and good

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, they will not be accountable for their

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in the future, because they will not feel any guilt for their

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. Punishing

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for their faults is a common practice in the world,

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it sometimes can have a negative effect on an offspring’s personality.

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, parents sometimes can use corporal

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for their offspring in order to teach them not to behave in a particular way

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but forget to explain

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to them

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what was the cause of

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punishment

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.

Children

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,

as a result

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of misunderstanding, become offended

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their parents, and

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in turn, weakens family bonds and trust among family members.

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,

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can sometimes be uncontrollable and do not listen to what others try to explain

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situation

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when they can badly behave and show

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disrespect towards parents and other people,

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can become an effective weapon to teach and attract

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the attention

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of

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.

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, it is important to use the

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kind of

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towards

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. Physical

punishment

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, mostly causes more problems than benefits,

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material restrictions,

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as taking a toy, can positively influence the

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and attract

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the attention

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of

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towards the problem.

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, sometimes rewarding

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for their good

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also

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can teach them the advantages of it, and even force their positive

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. In conclusion, it is vital for

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to know the difference between good and bad

behaviour

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from an early age.

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some people think that punishing is necessary in order to raise a good character in an offspring, I think that it sometimes can be replaced by rewarding them for their good

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, I

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think that in certain situations,

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should be punished in a soft manner, because

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can show them the consequences of their bad

behaviour

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.