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The graph below gives information from a2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projectionsuntil 2030. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projectionsuntil 2030. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates changes in
energy
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consumption
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 by
fuel
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 in the USA in six selected categories from 1980 to 2030. Units are measured in
quadrillion
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.
Fuel
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 includes
Petrol
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 and
Oil
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, Coal, Natural
Gas
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, Nuclear, Solar/Wind and Hydropower. At the beginning of the period,
Petrol
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 and
Oil
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 were the most commonly used
fuel
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energy
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, with 35
quadrillion
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. It was followed by Coal and Natural
Gas
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, with each having 20 and 15
quadrillion
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. As the data clearly shows, Nuclear, Solar/Wind and Hydropower stood at a mere just under 5
quadrillion
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 in 1980. After 2025, the
Petrol
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 and
Oil
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energy
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consumption
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 will have the highest figures of 50
quadrillion
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.
According to
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 the chart, Natural
Gas
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energy
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 was used more than Coal
consumption
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.
This
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 figure was 20
quadrillion
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.
In contrast
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, Coal
consumption
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 experienced 30
quadrillion
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,
while
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 natural
gas
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consumption
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 was 25
quadrillion
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 in 2030.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that the
consumption
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 of
petrol
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 and
oil
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 is the largest
fuel
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 during the all period. Relatively low figures observed in nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower witnessed well under 10
quadrillion
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 given the time period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, consumption, fuel, quadrillion, petrol, oil, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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