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The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the current layout of a remote
area
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 named Bunborough and the proposed changes in the village in 2024.
Overall
Linking Words
, significant developments include the development of rail track, hotels, additional roads and
replacement
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the replacement
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 of
fish
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the fish
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 port
to
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with
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 a promenade to ensure full utilisation of the available land. Currently, there are motorways that connect the
area
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 to the shops and the houses from Lynwich and
Maychester
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Manchester
,
however
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, in
future
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the future
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 more roads will be constructed to grant straight access to the
accomodation
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accommodation
 and shopping centre from the south direction.
Moreover
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, there are three fishing ports in the east of the plan, these will be reduced to one and the
area
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 will be utilised
fot
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for
 promenade.
In addition
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, the number and location of stores will remain
same
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the same
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 in the future but more homes will be formed in the north of the village. In
additon
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addition
, a railway track moving from the south to the northeast will be created which will surpass the residential
area
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 closely in the upcoming years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Anticipation
  • Significant
  • Conversion
  • Commercial activities
  • Expansion
  • Enhancing
  • Bypassing
  • Congestion
  • Connectivity
  • Recreational area
  • Demolition
  • Infrastructure
  • Preservation
  • Public transportation hub
  • Encourage
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