Fresh water has become a global problem for the world.What are the causes of it.What meaaures government and individual should take to resolve to the problem?Give reaaon e.g for your answer :
fresh and
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clean
could influence our
healthsFix the agreement mistake
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. the minimum education
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how important
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our daily activity.
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several
countryChange to a plural noun
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they have
hardCorrect article usage
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getWrong verb form
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a Remove the article
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clean
. we must
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fresh
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we
fresh
from the
from the river.
will
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by
purification. they
many
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to filter the
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to ready to
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Try to organize your ideas better. Make sure each paragraph has one main idea. Start with a clear introduction and finish with a conclusion.
Include more specific examples. Talk about the specific problems people face with clean water and some solutions that can be taken.
Check your spelling and grammar. Try to write simple sentences and avoid mistakes to make it easier to read.
You have identified the important issue of freshwater access.
You mention the process of water purification, which is relevant to the topic.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
- Summary
- Restatement of thesis
- Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
- In conclusion
- To conclude
- To summarize
- Finally
- In a nutshell
- In general