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The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book.

The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book.
The process diagram illustrates the complete process when developing and publishing a
book
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, there were 9 stages required when publishing a
book
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. It starts from writing the
book
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 content first before it becomes a hard copy and is available for distribution to bookshops. It will take approximately 18 to 24 months to complete and make books available in the market. The first three steps when producing a
book
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starts
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 with writing the content of the
book
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 and when completed the copy will be
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 sent to the publishing office. The script will go through critics made by the editors. After editing, a contract Add an article the
contracta
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contract
contractor
 contract The noun phrase contract seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article. show examples is created by the publishing house
then
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 followed by designing and finalizing the
book
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 layout.
Finally
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,
final
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 layout will go through
printing
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 process and
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followed
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 by binding all the pages into one
book
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. All books that were printed and
bind
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bound
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 will
distribute
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be distributed
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 to bookshops.

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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words book with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the eighth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the ninth paragraph.
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