The bar chart illustrates the proportion of men and women in jobs in the range of 60 to 64 years in 4 different
countries
in 1990 and 2000 respectively .
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decline
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a decline
the decline
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employment
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the employment
rate
for men in those Use synonyms
countries
in 2000 when compared to 1970 . Use synonyms
In
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contrast
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contrast,
rate
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employment
for women is almost stable and showed minimal change .
Citizens of Japan had Use synonyms
highest
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the highest
employment
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rate
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minimal
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a minimal
the minimal
employment
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rate
from 84 to 76% , Use synonyms
while
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employment
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rate
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other
two Correct article usage
the other
countries
Australia and Use synonyms
USA
declined gradually from Correct article usage
the USA
approx
75 % to 47 and 55 % respectively . The only exception is Replace the word
approximately
belgium
which showed Change the capitalization
Belgium
dramatic
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a dramatic
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employment
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the employment
rate
of about two -Use synonyms
third
.
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thirds
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in
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apply
women
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women's
employment
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rate
in all 4 Use synonyms
countries
has very minimal and negligible changes with Japan with the highest Use synonyms
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rate
, followed by Use synonyms
USA
. The other two Correct article usage
the USA
countries
were almost stable .Use synonyms
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