Fewer and fewer people now are write by hand with paincel or pen . What is the reason of this¿ Is it positive or negative development ¿

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essay I will look more into detail about the reasons and if it will be a good or bad improvement. One main reason that there are
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people writing
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is because of the enhancement of technology.
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on technology,
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so it will suit our life more .
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companies require a digital expert not only to improve their company but
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follow the newest method of writing. Going to why it has more advantages than disadvantages,the most important one
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the world needs now as you can see the rise of global warming
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trees to manufacture the papers . The best way to address
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is by reducing paper. If we tend to do that and rely on writing on paper,
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environment free from any problems.
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the biggest cause of writing by hand is decreasing thanks to technology, in my
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it is a positive development in one phrase it plays a big
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saving the planet.

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You have addressed the topic and provided your opinion at the end.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
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