You want to apply for a part-time job. Write a letter to the employer. In your letter: - Introduce yourself. - Explain why you are interested in the job. - Outline your relevant experience and skills.

Dear ..... ,  I
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you because I need a part-time job. My name is Rimas Khallaf and I am a study the second year of mechanical engineering at King Fahad
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for Petroleum ( KFUPM).   At
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university students the another way to help them in their lifestyle . Because the cost in
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days was increased. And it was difficult for to me cover all things like ( food , petroleum , and electricity) , especially since I did not live with my family. I have some skills , First I used a computer when I was 10 , so I learned Java and Python when I was younger.
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, I have some communication skills because I speak English very well and always talk with other people in different countries on Twitch and Discord. Yours faithfully, Rimas Khallaf

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greeting and closing
Make sure to use a proper greeting like 'Dear [Employer's Name]' and close with a polite ending like 'Sincerely'.
logical structure
Try to clearly separate your points into paragraphs so that it is easier to read.
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Make sure you explain why this job is a good fit for you and what you can bring to it.
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Good introduction with your name and a bit about yourself.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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