The apartment that you have rented was repaired recently. Later, you discovered some defects in repairs. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain what the problem is suggest how it can be fixed say what you would like the landlord to do about it.

Dear Sir , I am writing
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letter to draw your attention to a pressing issue concerning
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unfinished repairs that
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done by the Unifying Contractor Company . My name is Harvi and I am living as a tenant in your apartment which is located in the city of Cambridge . A month ago, I complained about the broken ceiling of the living room and the kitchen cabinets are not closing properly.
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really thankful to you that you sent a person to take care of
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matter
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, the problem is
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because he did not complete his work with authenticity. All the kitchen cabinets are still stuck
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the same place and
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is not fixed .
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convoluted issue will be fixed by a knowledgeable person with ample experience . I want you to call the company again and explain the whole situation and please request them to send a genuine individual to curb the situation. I hope
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issue will be addressed at its earliest and you can contact me for future information at your convenience. Yours faithfully, Harvi

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Task Response
Your explanation of the problem is clear, but make sure to cover all parts of the task. Try to add more details about how the defects affect you.
Coherence and Cohesion
Make sure each paragraph has a clear idea. You can choose one main point for each paragraph and stay focused on that idea.
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The greeting and closing are polite and appropriate for a letter to a landlord.
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You clearly describe the issue with the repairs, which helps the landlord understand your concerns.
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