Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others, however, deny that these factors have any significant influence on people’s behaviour. What is your opinion on that issue?

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many

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feel that

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on screen has a negative effect on

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,others reject

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opinion citing that there is no change in

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's behaviour

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television and computer

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.I personally agree with the first group of

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. With the increase in the penetration of internet in the

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,different types of

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and

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have become common.Media in general plays a very important role in shaping our

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if it shows

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which promotes

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,

people

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will tend to believe that it is correct.

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,in India, most of the masses look up to a movie star and think that whatever a movie star does is correct.

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,if a movie promotes violent

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people

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will think disturbance is correct and

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will start doing it themselves.

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effect has been showing in our

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for the past few years , especially with the increase in movies which have normalised abuse and stalking.

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,computer

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are usually played by the younger generation

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are the pioneers of our future if they start playing

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with extreme

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they will be severely

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affected by them.Usually,a child

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playing

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in their adolescence,

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stage is very fragile,as children get easily influenced by their surroundings ,and they even sometimes start imitating what they see in their own lives,

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this

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could be extremely dangerous.

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,in the past few years, there has been an increase in violent activities in schools and when we closely look at it,usually a child has played a game and wants to replicate it in their own life. In conclusion,

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in any form or style hurts our

society

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very badly. It could be through television or computer

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.

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,to safeguard our futures

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a medium of

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should be published carefully.