> The maps below show the centre of a small town calles Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. >

> The maps below show the centre of a small town calles Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. >
IELTS Writing Task Chart for > The maps below show the centre of a small town calles Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. >
The diagram depicts
the
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how the Islip
town
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centre looks now and what will be the changes that are planned to occur.
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, there will be significant
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as there are many new areas that are being added
such
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as
bus
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station, car park and a shopping centre around a new dual carriageway. The most striking feature seen is the expansion of the main
road
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into a dual carriageway around the whole
town
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connecting to all places especially the school and housing at the south of
town
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.
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, the main
road
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earlier at the
center
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of the
town
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will be changed to a
pedestrains
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pedestrian
road
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. To the north of
the
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this
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road
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, were only shops which will be pulled down and
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the bus station will be followed by the shopping centre and the car park there. To the right of it, we will see the newly introduced housing for which a
samll
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small
road
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has been built to connect with the carriageway. Coming to the south portion of the pedestrian
road
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, the
shops
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area there will remain intact with no change. The park at the
south-east
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southeast
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corner of the has been
shrinked
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shrunk
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with the new housing built just to the left of it,
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followed to the left of it will be the housing which was already there.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • maps
  • centre of a small town
  • development
  • current
  • planned
  • features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • summary
  • information
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