The first chart shows the percentage of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The first chart shows the percentage of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The first chart shows the percentage of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
The 2 bar chart
compare
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the proportion of
males
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and females engaged in various household chores which are cooking, cleaning, pet care,
house
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and house
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repairs and the amount of time they spend on each
activities
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per day.
Overall
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, the percentages of household chores and the amount of time spent
is
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are
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almost the same. Looking first
at
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apply
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, approximately 80% of
women
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involved
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are involved
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in cooking, compared to about 60% of
men
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.
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, the percentage of females in cleaning
are
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is
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slightly greater than
males
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, with approximately 70%, in
comparision
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comparison
to 40% for
males
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. In the proportion of pet
care
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care,
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both
men
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and
women
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shared nearly similar standing. The figures for house repairs bucked the trend, about 20% of
men
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participated in
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this
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these
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chores,
in contrast
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to nearly 10% of
women
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.
According to
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second
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chart, females spend more time
o'n
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on
cooking than
males
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, over 80
minutes
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and 60
minutes
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respectively. Cleaning takes around 70
minutes
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for
women
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and about 45
minutes
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for
men
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. The figures for pet care are nearly the same for both genders.
While
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men
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devote around 20
minutes
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for
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house repair,
women
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spend less than 10
minutes
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words males, women, men, minutes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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