The maps show the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevant.

The maps show the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevant.
The map
illustartes
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illustrates
the Stokeford
town
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from 1930 and
same
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the same
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town
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at
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in
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2010.
Overall
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, there
is
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are
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huge changes
happned
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happened
from
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since
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1930
,
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;
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they
build
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built
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new shops and
also
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added many
Lagrge
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large
houses and changed
that
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them
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to Old age homes.
they
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They
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also
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removed old garden,
tress
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trees
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and farmland from the
town
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in 2010.
To begin
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with,
in
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on
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the north west
side
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of
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the village
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village
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village,
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they removed old shops and added the new shopping
center
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centre
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, and they
keep
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kept
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post
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the post
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office as it was. In the
north east
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northeast
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side
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of the map, they removed
trail
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the trail
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and farmland for cows, and
also
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build
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built
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new houses and extended the primary school.
Moreover
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, they created the new
C- shape
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C-shaped
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shopping centre in the middle of
town
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for local shoppers.
Furthermore
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,
in
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on
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south
east
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southeast
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side
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of
the
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apply
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Stokeford
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Stokeford,
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they converted and
extend
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extended
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large
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a large
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house to
Retirement
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a Retirement
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home for senior
citizen
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citizens
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of the
town
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and connected
to
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it to
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main
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the main
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road,
while
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they cut down some
tress
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trees
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from the city
center
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centre
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. In the south west
side
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of
Stokeford
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Stokeford,
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they cultivated the old farmland and
build
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built
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new shops,
while
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they
keep
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kept
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the riverv
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riverv
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river
and bridge
same
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the same
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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