These days, a lot of people have their own computer and telephone, it has become quit easy do job from home. Do you think it has more advantages and disadvantages of work from home?

Working from home has been a trend these days. With the availability of gadgets
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and
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, it has been easier for people to perform their
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outside the office premises. I personally believe that it has more disadvantages than advantages. The effects of technology
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drastically
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the ways people live. It became a big part of
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daily life. It is undeniable that everybody has been dependent
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the comfort technology has provided, from making work tasks easier to creating greater opportunities.
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is true, employees are becoming lazy.
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of giving their best, they rely mostly on what they can search online and
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creating a mediocre result.
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, the use of
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creates a gap from work colleagues.
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of making time to talk and spend time physically, a lot are opting to use their social media accounts to call and communicate.
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sometimes
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misunderstandings and
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miscommunications
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bonds and
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work drama. Forgetting how to communicate and
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effectively often leads to issues and could
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cause people to be aloof and
anti-social
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.
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, the undeniable benefits of working from home
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hard to counter
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the disruptions it
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something that we should not just turn a blind eye
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Privilege like
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should be taken into consideration to make sure that it will not create a chokehold
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everybody. With
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being said, I believe that the disadvantages of working from home
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the benefits of it.

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