The line graph demonstrates the number of
pariticipants
for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia Correct your spelling
participants
from
2000 to 2020.
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, from
Overall
, Linking Words
film
club attracted more city people, so Correct article usage
the film
this
was the reason why it Linking Words
is
the direction for 20 years. Opposite, urban Wrong verb form
has been
residents
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doesn't
prefer amateur dramatics, so Correct subject-verb agreement
don't
this
activity declined rapidly from 2005 to 2020.
Film club leads the line graph, Linking Words
maintain
a period of stability with more than 60 participants in 2000, declined Correct subject-verb agreement
maintains
60
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by 60
residents
in 2010 and 65 Use synonyms
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peoples
in 10 yearsFix the agreement mistake
people
later
. Rephrase
apply
Besides
, martial arts Linking Words
follow
closely Wrong verb form
followed
film
club with 36 urban Correct article usage
the film
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peoples
in 2000, 38 Fix the agreement mistake
people
residents
in 2010 Use synonyms
but
dropped to 3rd place, after table tennis in 2020.
Table tennis has Punctuation problem
, but
a
climbed quickly from 2010 to 2020. In 2000, Correct article usage
apply
this
sport had 25 Linking Words
pariticipants
, after martial arts, declined to 20 Correct your spelling
participants
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peoples
in 2010, but rose rapidly to more than 50 Fix the agreement mistake
people
residents
in 2020. Started in 2005 with 0 Use synonyms
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peoples
, musical performances attracted city dwellers and increased to less than 20 Fix the agreement mistake
people
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peoples
in 2020. Opposite, Fix the agreement mistake
people
residents
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doesn't
prefer amateur dramatics, so Correct subject-verb agreement
don't
this
is the reason why Linking Words
this
activity has Linking Words
a
dipped sharply on 15 years. In 2000, amateur dramatics had more than 20 Correct article usage
apply
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peoples
, increased to 28 in 2005 Fix the agreement mistake
people
but
decreased to the bottom of the line graph in 2020, Punctuation problem
, but
in
the Change preposition
during
Covid
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COVID-19
epidemic
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pandemic
with
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, with
less
than 10 Fix the agreement mistake
fewer
residents
.Use synonyms