It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are causes? And what will be the effects on society?

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essay argues that nowadays, in many countries, there are not enough
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who prefer to
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science
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subjects
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because
students
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find mathematics or physics difficult.
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causes innovation shortages and workforce imbalances. To solve
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issue, we need to encourage our
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by making the
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easier for them. On the one hand, many
students
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do not prefer to
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science
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subjects
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because they find mathematics or physics difficult.
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, many teachers make
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very difficult, which results in many
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not choosing to
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these
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, and
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affects workforce balance.
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, in the U.S., a survey showed that 70% of
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choose to
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law or history because it is easier than mathematics or physics.
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, to solve
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issue, we need to encourage
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to
study
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science
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subjects
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and learn why they are very important.
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, we should try to make
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easier for
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to help them
study
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, and we should talk to their parents to help their children
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.
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, we should make review questions available before
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.
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, in Egypt, a survey showed that 60% of some schools improved in
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subjects
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because they helped
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in many ways to make the
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easier for them. In conclusion, many
students
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do not like to
study
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science
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subjects
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, but we need to help them improve in these difficult
subjects
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by making review questions available before
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to help them, and we should encourage
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to keep going.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering and Mathematics)
  • intrinsic complexity
  • interdisciplinary
  • career counseling
  • hands-on experience
  • financial constraints
  • cultural stereotypes
  • technological stagnation
  • economic growth
  • foreign experts
  • healthcare advancements
  • educational gap
  • perceived difficulty
  • reliance
  • environmental challenges
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