The chart below shows the amount of energy generated from wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.

The chart below shows the amount of energy generated from wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the amount of energy generated from wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.
The bar chart compares the production of energy through wind in India,
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, Germany, and the US. Figures are given for 1980 and 2000. It's clear from the chart that three figures followed an uninterrupted upward trajectory,
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the United States experienced a marginal decline. In the initial years, the same disparity persisted in all countries except the US, where production reached its peak at 1,200
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, which was greater than the sum of the other countries.
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,
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remained at the bottom in 1985. In 1990–1995, most countries increased electricity production roughly threefold, starting from 400
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and reaching a high of 1,200
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megawatts.
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, India and Germany shared similar standings in 1995 (800
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),
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Denmark
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's figures followed a steady and consistent growth from 400 to 1,200
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. The gap became noticeable in 2000, when
Denmark
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's wind energy output surpassed that of the US. US rates were at the top for 10 years, but
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growth was not sustained.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words denmark, megawatts with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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