The given table describes
Correct article usage
the work-forces
work-forces
of Use the right word
workforce
both
sexes in New Zealand from 1993 to 2003
Use synonyms
Overall
, most of the Linking Words
females
and the Use synonyms
males
Use synonyms
keen
on Verb problem
are keen
work
in services and transport over the given period. Replace the word
working
In contrast
, the least attractive job for women was agriculture and building Linking Words
Linking Words
while
for men Punctuation problem
, while
was
agriculture.
Looking at the table from a more detailed perspective, Correct pronoun usage
it was
firstly
, the rates of the Linking Words
Use synonyms
females
workforce decreased slightly from 53% to 36% Fix the agreement mistake
female
whereas
the figure for the Linking Words
males
increased from 22% to 31%. Use synonyms
Secondly
, the figure for the Linking Words
females
who worked in agriculture decreased by 2% Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
it
for Correct pronoun usage
that
males
was 30%. Use synonyms
Thirdly
, the number of Linking Words
both
women and men in business employment increased Use synonyms
approximately
20%. Change preposition
by approximately
In contrast
, Linking Words
both
the Use synonyms
females
and Use synonyms
males
in manufacturing Use synonyms
job
decreased from 25% and 16% to 12% and 17% respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
Subsequently
, in 1993, no one was Linking Words
female
worked in Fix the agreement mistake
females
building
sector Correct article usage
the building
but
the number rose by 6% over a decade Punctuation problem
, but
and
the rate of Punctuation problem
, and
males
Use synonyms
work
in Wrong verb form
working
aforementioned
sector dropped by 2%. Correct article usage
the aforementioned
Last
but not least, the percentage of Linking Words
both
sexes participating in community services increased approximately 5%.Use synonyms