Advances in science and technology have contributed to various environmental problems. Some people suggest that adopting a simpler lifestyle would help preserve the environment, while others maintain that scientific and technological solutions can resolve these issues. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

having

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simplier

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simpler

lifestyle is the best way to preserve nature.

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for

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example,

use

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using

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less electricity, driving less, or avoiding

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much technology can reduce the pollution. People can

also

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recycle, produce their own food, or buy fewer things.

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This

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small changes in daily life can help lower the amount of waste and

ernergy

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energy

that we use.

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this

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solution is

also

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cheap and can be done

wby

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anyone. technological and scientific can

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be helpful for

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envirnement

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environment

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are many good examples, solar panels, electric cars, and machines that

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clean the air and water. AI and robots can

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help doctors work

easier

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more easily

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and

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apply

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efficient

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. But, the problem is, during the making and testing

technology

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often

produce

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a lot of waste.

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Jul 8, 2025

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task achievement

Make sure to have a clear introduction that states both sides of the argument.

coherence cohesion

Try to use linking words for better flow, like 'firstly', 'however', and 'for example'.

coherence cohesion

Add a conclusion that summarizes your opinion and the main points discussed.

task achievement

You provided specific examples like solar panels and electric cars.

task achievement

You mentioned the benefits of a simpler lifestyle, which is a good point.

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Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Sentence 2 - Example
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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

123 words

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