Topic: The charts below give information on the consumption of water by agricultural products in Australia in 2014, and the share of income they produced.

Topic: The charts below give information on the consumption of water by agricultural products in Australia in 2014, and the share of income they produced.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for Topic: The charts below give information on the consumption of water by agricultural products in Australia in 2014, and the share of income they produced.
The following pie charts illustrate the percentage of water consumption by the farming sector products, and its
income
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generation in Australia over the year 2014. From an
overall
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perspective, it has been observed that fruit area
income
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saw the highest proportion,
while
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the livestock part dropped significantly over the given time.
However
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, sugar remained steady. A closer examination reveals
tha
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that
,
to begin
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with, sugar and dairy products remain almost the same in 10% and 21% respectively . Interestingly, rice jumped 12% to reach 19%
income
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in 2014. Since
then
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, the fruit water consumption and its
income
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increase have been more swift.
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, the livestock underwent a dramatic downward trend from 36% to 5%
at the end
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of the year 2014.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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