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You should spend around 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the amount of energy generated by wind in four countries in the period 1980-2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

You should spend around 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the amount of energy generated by wind in four countries in the period 1980-2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates how much
wind
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energy
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 was produced in four countries between 1980 and 2000.
Overall
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, the United States produced the highest amount of
wind
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energy
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 in
this
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 period of time. Germany showed the lowest result. In 1985, 200
megawatts
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 of
energy
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 were generated in India
and
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, and
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this
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 number rose slightly in 1990 to 400
megawatts
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. As it
keptgrowing
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kept growing
at the end
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 of the period, it was 12 00
megawatts
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. As the bar chart shows, in the beginning,around 200
megawatts
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 of
wind
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energy
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was
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were
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 produced in Denmark. In Germany, 400
megawatts
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 of
energy
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 were generated in 1985. The bar chart for Denmark and Germany production was approximately 16 00 and 10 00
megawatts
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in
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at
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 the end of the period, respectively.
In contrast
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, 12 00
megawatts
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 of
wind
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energy
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 was produced in
United
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the United
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 States in the beginning
and
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, and
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this
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 number increased gradually to over 16 00
megawatts
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 in 1990.
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, it started decreasing slowly, and in 2000, it was around 14
megawatts
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words wind, energy, megawatts with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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