The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps show how the village of Reymouth has developed from 1995 to now. Over time, there has replacement in the north-east area. Some buildings have been constructed in the south direction. There is an area near the water which has been demolished. Some infrastructures have remained unchanged in past and present
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also
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. In the year 1995, there was a massive farmland which was now replaced with a golf course and tennis
along with
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was forest park which has been eradicated completely. In the north-west, housing places did not change,
as well as
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hotels and cafes
also
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remained unchanged, but is parking area was added in the hotel premises, and the housing road was expanded in the west direction. In the south, shops were there in 1995, and now it has been replaced with a restaurant.
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, the fish market has been replaced with apartments. In the sea, there was a fishing port for fishers, but now it has been removed.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • land use
  • residential expansion
  • modernization effort
  • commercial
  • urban development
  • preserved
  • recreational areas
  • transportation infrastructure
  • eco-friendly
  • renovation
  • transformation
  • bike paths
  • car park
  • establishment
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