You recently moved house and you used a removal Company to help you move your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter, •Give details of the move •Describe the damage • Say what you would like the manager to do.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to demonstrate my dissatisfaction with your removal company for several reasons.

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recently migrated from Delhi to Mumbai on May 21st

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booked your company to help me with moving. One of my friends referred me to

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your workers

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exceptional service.

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, it turned out to be my worst experience. When we started packing my stuff,

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told each and every member to handle some boxes with extra care because

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had my crockery and photo frames. After shifting, when

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was unpacking the luggage,

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found out my glass utensils were shattered into

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pieces

and frames were

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broken. I got really disappointed with the service. I really want you to look into

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matter. I will send you the cost of

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damage happened. Can you please provide me

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refund for that

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Looking forward

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your response. Your's faithfully Sim