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The table below shows the percentage of people going to the cinema and how often they went between 1994 and 2002. The line graph shows the average number of cinema visits per year by age group

The table below shows the percentage of people going to the cinema and how often they went between 1994 and 2002. The line graph shows the average number of cinema visits per year by age group
The table illustrates the percentage of people going to cinemas and how frequently they went between 1994 and 2002. The line graph shows the average
number
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 of
cinema
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visits
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 per year for four different
age
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 groups.
Overall
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, the percentage of people attending to
cinema
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 slightly increased,
while
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 the average
number
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 of
visits
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 per person decreased.
In addition
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, there are fluctuations in their figures, and 14 to 24-year-olds were the most frequent
cinema
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 visitors. In 1994, the percentage of people going to the
cinema
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 was 67%, which increased to 72% in 1996. There was a slight drop of around 2% in 2000, before it rose again to reach 72% by 2002. In terms of frequency, the average
number
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 of
cinema
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visits
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 per person rose from 10.7 in 194 to 11.3
times
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 in 1996, before falling steadily to 8.3
times
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 by 2002.
According to
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 the line graph, in 1994, the youngest
age
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 group (14 to 24 years old) went to the
cinema
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 about 12
times
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 yearly, followed by the 25-34
age
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 group with around 10
visits
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. In 1996, the figures of all groups increased by about 1 time before dropping significantly by nearly 5
times
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 in 1998. After that, the
number
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 of
visits
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 grew slightly, with the 14-24
age
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 group consistently having the highest attendance.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, cinema, visits, age, times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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