This line graph shows the percentage of women who were employed in four countries from 1985 to 2005. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information

The line graph compares the rate of females who were employed in four countries – the

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, Korea, Afghanistan and France during a 20-year period (from 1985 to 2005) In general, the trends of all employment increased among countries, with the exception of Afghanistan, which saw a significant fall over the period.

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, the

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was the most dominant country over the era,

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France became the second most popular among countries, and Korea was the least among the four locations at the beginning of the year

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was dominant at the beginning of the date with nearly 45% and slipped

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by fifteen

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in the next ten years

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, the tendency reached to peak, approximately 65% in 2000, and ended with 60%. Turning to Afghanistan, in 1985 it demonstrated the percentage, just above 30% and in 1995 it peaked, showing below 40%. Starting from 1995, it started to go down, respectively, from 40% to 10%, and

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of the duration ended with a zero rate. Starting with France, it was dominated by 40%, after the

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tendency fluctuated

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and decreased by ten

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in the next five years.

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it went up to just above 50% and stayed unchanged till 2005.

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what is shown, Korea was the only country that increased. It started with 20% in 1985, and grew respectively, to around 30% in 1995. After 1995, the trend rose slightly from 30% to 40% in 2005.