The diagram below shows the changes of the town named Shakefield from 1995 until now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below shows the changes of the town named Shakefield from 1995 until now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the changes of the town named Shakefield from 1995 until now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
These maps illustrate Shakefield's
city
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plan between 1995 and now.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the place became more comfortable for living and constructed dozens of buildings for new citizens and tourists. Only the coffee shop did not change during the period. In 1995, there was a big public
park
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in the centre of the town. There was a big farmland on the top of the
city
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. The hotel is located in the left corner of the
park
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. Opposite the hotel was a small coffee shop, and near it there was a fish market. The sports centre was on the left side of the hotel. People's houses are built near sports centres. At the bottom of the
city
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, there was the sea , and morning fishing boats
located
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were located
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near the fish market. In the next two dozen years, the
city
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changed all. Public
park
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cut down and new holiday homes constructed. Farmland became a golf and tennis course when a new car
park
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was built on the right side of the holiday homes. The fish market was demolished , and new apartments were built
instead
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of its place. A new housing area was created near sports centres,
while
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these centres became restaurants. New yachts were put out for tourists.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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