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The pie charts show the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of energy in France in 1995 and 2005.

The pie charts show the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of energy in France in 1995 and 2005.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of various types of
energy
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 produced in France in 1995 and 2005.
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, it is evident that the
production
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 proportions of coal, gas, nuclear, and other
energy
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 types increased over the decade,
whereas
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petro
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petroleum
production
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 saw a substantial decline. In detail, coal and gas experienced slight growth in their shares of
energy
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production
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. In 1995, coal accounted for 29.80% of total
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production
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, and
this
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 figure rose marginally to 30.93% in 2005.
Similarly
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, the proportion of gas increased from 29.63% to 30.31% during the same period.
On the other hand
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, nuclear
energy
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 and the "Other" category showed more significant increases. Nuclear
energy
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production
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 expanded from 6.40% in 1995 to 10.10% in 2005,
while
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 the share of other
energy
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 types nearly doubled, growing from 4.90% to 9.10%.
In contrast
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, petroleum
production
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 witnessed a dramatic decrease. In 1995, it contributed 29.27% to France’s
energy
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production
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, but by 2005,
this
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 proportion had fallen to 19.55%, marking the largest drop among all
energy
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 sources.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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