You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you return home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. -Explain the problem. -Say why the documents are important. -Suggest a solution.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter to express my concern about
essential
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documents that I
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forgot at your hotel yesterday. I visited your Sunrise Hotel a couple of days ago for a business meeting. My company signed a marketing deal with an overseas company.
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my boss handed over all documents to me. We checked out yesterday, as I was on a phone call,
I
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I left my paper bag in a drawer. When I
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it, it was too late. The documents are crucial for me, as it was my first dealing with a client, and
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partnership is really vital to enhance the productivity of our business. If I couldn't find the papers, I would be terminated.
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, there is a way to address
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issue. One of my friends is currently residing at your hotel. Could you please check my room and give
papers
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to him. His name is Ranveer Singh. If it doesn't work, you can
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fax all the papers to me. I will send you all the mandatory details. I would really appreciate
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your attention to
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matter. Looking forward to hearing back from you. Your's faithfully, Ash

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Task Achievement
Make sure to include a clear opening that states the purpose of your letter more directly.
Coherence and Cohesion
Try to keep your sentences clear and avoid repetition like 'I' and 'documents'. This will improve flow and understanding.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure you have a strong closing statement that summarizes your request and expresses your gratitude.
Task Achievement
Your explanation of the importance of the documents is strong and clear, which conveys urgency well.
Task Achievement
You used a polite tone in your letter, which is very appropriate for formal communication.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • important
  • papers
  • hotel
  • meeting
  • problem
  • documents
  • solution
  • contents
  • information
  • vital
  • project
  • staff
  • check
  • address
  • pick up
  • mail
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