Some nations set legal requirements for people to drink at a particular
to lessen the number of accidents, and to aware them about the alcohol-related problems.
, other countries think that having no stringent rules
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and freedom to enjoy their life. I am with the former view.
On the one hand, Nations that set a legal drinking
, usually around 18 to 21 years
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to control the bad habits and health risks among people.
, there are a number of accidents on roads because of
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driving. Setting an
limit
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the dangers for
and they can focus on their targets.
, teenagers and
are quite health-conscious towards their health and learning about
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health-related problems in school. In schools, engaging in different activities can help
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divert their minds
of indulging in alcohol consumption. I think
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legal
promotes a social framework effectively and
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the
about health-related risks.
, having no strict rules and regulations provides a sense of freedom and
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to individuals, and allows them to make choices
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their own.
, they think it is their responsibility to teach youth
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how they can drink and drive in a safe environment. Another point is that
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having no pressure and enforcement by authorities
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to make their
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relationships with alcohol products
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, individuals love to consume it when they are facing any kind of stress or trouble in their life
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as low grades, job loss or workplace demotion,
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them to become drug
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, which automatically ruins their life and career.
why, I believe, nations have to make laws for public health and safety.
, undoubtedly, no laws provide the freedom and relaxation to forget their worries
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I think legal
is essential for the better growth of
, and for reducing the accidents on roads.