The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.

The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
The table illustrates the
number
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of both workforce and
factories
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involved in silk production in two different regions (England, Wales) from 1851 to 1901.
Overall
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, the
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of females was constantly higher than their male counterparts in all the years listed.
Additionally
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, the
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of total employees showed a downward trend,
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that of
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increased. In terms of the workforce, females took the lead, starting with 76,786 in 1851, gradually declining to 25,567 in 1901.
Similarly
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, male employment started at 53,964 in 1851 and declined steadily to 13,375 in 1901, mirroring the trend observed among female workers. As can be seen, the total
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of employees declined throughout the measured years, from 130,750 in 1851 to 38,942 in 1901.
In contrast
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, the
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of silk production
factories
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experienced a sharp increase over the 40 years, starting with 272
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in 1851, and approximately tripled by 1901, reaching 623.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, factories with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Industrial expansion
  • Manufacturing hub
  • Technological innovation
  • Economic contribution
  • Productivity enhancement
  • Global market dynamics
  • Urbanization
  • Workforce demographics
  • Production scale
  • Social implications
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