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The line graphs show wheat exports in Australia, Canada and European Community Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graphs show wheat exports in Australia, Canada and European Community Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the amount of
wheat
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 exported by
Australia
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,
Canada
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, and the
European
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Community
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 between 1985 and 1990, measured in
million
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tonnes
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.
Overall
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,
Canada
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 exported the most
wheat
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 in most of the given years,
while
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Australia
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 had the lowest export figures throughout the period. The
European
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Community
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 showed a steady upward trend, contrasting with the fluctuating patterns of the other two regions. In 1985,
Canada
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 had the highest
wheat
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exports
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 at about 19
million
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tonnes
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, followed by the
European
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Community
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 and
Australia
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, both with figures around 15-17
million
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tonnes
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. Over the next three years,
Canada
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’s
exports
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 rose significantly, reaching a peak of 25
million
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tonnes
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 in 1988, before experiencing a sharp decline to 14
million
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tonnes
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 in 1989.
However
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, they recovered slightly to around 18
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990.
Australia
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's
wheat
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exports
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 followed a downward trend
overall
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. Starting at around 15
million
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tonnes
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 in 1985, the figure declined gradually and reached just over 11
million
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tonnes
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 by 1990.
In contrast
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, the
European
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Community
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 showed a mild dip in 1986 but
then
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 steadily increased its
wheat
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exports
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 from 14
million
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tonnes
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 in 1986 to over 20
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990, surpassing
Australia
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 after 1986 and
Canada
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 in 1989.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, australia, canada, european, community, million, tonnes, exports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • trends
  • fluctuations
  • decline
  • rise
  • surpass
  • modest growth
  • significant
  • stability
  • comparisons
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