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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
milk
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production
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 among four nations in three years 1990,2000
and
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, and
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 2010.
Overall
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,
this
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 table shows the
milk
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production
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 of the
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Natherland
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Netherlands
, Australia,
Tanzania
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 and
Guatemala
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,
while
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 the highest amount of
milk
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 produced by the
Natherland
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 followed by
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Australia within all times.
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Guatemala
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 produced
lowest
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the lowest
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 amount of
milk
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 over the years.
Firstly
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, the
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Natherland
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Netherlands
 decreased
the
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its
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milk
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production
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 over the
decade
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 from 1990
and
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, and
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then
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production
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was
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increased in
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last
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the last
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decade
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 of the given period. The
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Natherland
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Netherlands
 produced
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11,262,000
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liters
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litres
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 in 1990,
while
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 in
2010
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2010,
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 11,466,000
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liters
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litres
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milk
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of milk
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produced
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were produced
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.
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Australia reduced their
milk
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production
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 over the two
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decade
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decades
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with
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by
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 9,165,000
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liters
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litres
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 compared to 11,246,000
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liters
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litres
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 in 1990.
Lastly
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,
the
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Tanzania
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 and
the
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Guatemala
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 constantly increased their dairy
production
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 over
thye
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the
last
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 two
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decade
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decades
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 from 1990 to 2010, where
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Tanzania
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 and
the
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Guatemala
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 produced 87,000 and 26,000
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liters
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litres
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 respectively in 1990. They climbed in
production
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 with 1,55,000
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liters
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litres
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 from
the
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Tanzania
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 and 84,000
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liters
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litres
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 from
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Guatemala
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at the end
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 of the given period, but these two countries have less
overall
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production
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 than
thair
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their
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 counterparts.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, overall, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, production, natherland, tanzania, guatemala, decade, liters with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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