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The charts below show the reasons of students to study a particular in a UK university in the year 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The charts below show the reasons of students to study a particular in a UK university in the year 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The pie charts compare the reasons why
students
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 chose a college or university in the United Kingdom in the years 1987 and 2007.
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, what stands out from the chart is that the largest proportion of
students
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 went to the
UK
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 for suitable degree courses in both years. Looking at the details, the main purpose of going to the
UK
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 was suitable degree courses, with 35% and 37% in the two years. As for the proportion of
students
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 who went to the
UK
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 for the quality of resources was a bit higher in 1987 than in 2007, with 21% and 17% respectively.
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, the percentage of
students
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 who went to the
UK
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 for good sports and social activities was smaller in 1987 than in 2007, with 10% and 22% in that order. Only 19% of
students
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 went to the
UK
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 in order to be close to their parental home in 1987, after which the proportion declined significantly to 6% in 2007. When it comes to the percentage of
students
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 who went to the
UK
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, for quality of teaching was 15% in 1987. By 2007,
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 figure had increased slowly to 18%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, uk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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