The two maps below show the island, before and after the constructions of some tourist facilities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the island, before and after the constructions of some tourist facilities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show the island, before and after the constructions of some tourist facilities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These two maps show how an
island
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has changed since 1980, before and after some tourist facilities were built.
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, the
island
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in 1980 was simple and quiet, but today it is full of modern tourist places and activities. In 1980, the
island
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was very natural and quiet. There was a
reception
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in the middle of the
island
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and a restaurant to the north of it. There were some small huts for accommodation on the west and east sides. A footpath connected the buildings, and a vehicle track went from the pier to the
reception
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and the restaurant. The pier was used for sailing, and the beach on the west was for swimming. The
east
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eastern
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part of the
island
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was empty in 1980. Today, the
island
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looks very different. The
reception
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and restaurant are still in the same place, but many things have been added. A pool is now near the
reception
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. There are more accommodation huts on the west side, and new apartments have been built on the east side where there was nothing in 1980.
there
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There
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are now shops and restaurants in the north, a diving school on the east coast, and a surf beach. More vehicle tracks, footpaths, and a boardwalk have been built to make it easier for tourists to walk and travel around the
island
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.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, reception with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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