the diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station sunrise information by selecting and reporting the main features in may competitions where relevent

the diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station sunrise information by selecting and reporting the main features in may competitions where relevent
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station sunrise information by selecting and reporting the main features in may competitions where relevent
The picture illustrates the detailed process for electricity production in a hydroelectric
power
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station
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. The process includes various steps by which
water
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from the river produces
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power
Correct article usage
a power
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supply
at the end
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to
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for
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national
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the national
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grid.
Overall
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,
this
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process can be
operate
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operated
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mainly during sunlight. Meanwhile,
in
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at
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night
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nighttime
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nighttime,
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the
water
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flows in the reverse direction.
Firstly
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, the dam on the river acts as a high-level
reservoir
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;
Punctuation problem
,
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which
provide
Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
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water
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intake in daytime to the
power
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station
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.
Furthermore
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, in the
power
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station
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in daytime reversible turbines operate a generator to produce energy and pass
rest
Correct article usage
the rest
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of the
water
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flow to a low-level
reservoir
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.
Lastly
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,
from
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apply
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generator the
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the generator
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energy
Verb problem
generates energy
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uses
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used
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in
national
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the national
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grid by passing through
power
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lines.
However
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, during the nighttime, intake of
water
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flow from the
reservoir
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remains close
and
Punctuation problem
, and
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from
low- level
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the low-level
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reservoir
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water
Punctuation problem
, water
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flow
Correct subject-verb agreement
flows
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travels
Verb problem
apply
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into a
power
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station
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.
Additionally
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, after sunset
the
Punctuation problem
, the
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turbine
act
Correct subject-verb agreement
acts
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as a pump; it pushes
water
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to the
high level
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high-level
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-
Punctuation problem
apply
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reservoir
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.

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