PThe chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change n each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

PThe chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change n each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for PThe chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change n each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The chart depicts the value of one nation's exports of Petroleum
products
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, Engineered
goods
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, Gems and jewellery, Agricultural
products
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and Textiles
.
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from 2015 to 2016. The table
also
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illustrates the ratio of
goods
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changes between 2015 to 2016.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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in 2016 the country had climbed in terms of exports compared to 2015. The ratio indicates that the Textile industry had a phenomenal uplift compared to others.
To begin
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with, Petroleum
products
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, Engineered
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and engineered
goods
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in 2015 were the most exported
products
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with
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the
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estimated
revenue
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of 70
billion
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dollars
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and 65
billion
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dollars
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.
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, in
2016
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2016,
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both of the
products
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had a climb in
sales
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of 3% each .
In addition
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, Textiles were the most in terms of export in 2015 , but in 2016 it went up by 15.24 per cent and secured the second
last
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place.
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, the Gems and jewellery alone were securing
sales
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around 52
billion
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dollars
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after
Engineered
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goods
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, but in the year
2016
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2016,
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the
sales
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dropped by 5.18%.
Besides
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that, Agricultural
product
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products
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had a very minor uplift in
sales
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, roughly 0.81% with the total revenue of around 47
billion
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dollars
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, goods, billion, dollars, sales with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "uplift" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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